[ Allergies ] Open Question : I am suffering please help me.?
I am cover with hives from head to toe, and nothing seems to help me, does anyone know any remedy for severe hives that can help me? Even something to give me relieve from the itchiness would do it. Please I am desperate. Thanks
Megan
[ Poetry ] Open Question : Re-post again, could someone critique this?
I guess I posted it the wrong times before. It's late now though too, so...
Anyway, I had a hard time with this because I tried writing it during a time when I just wasn't very creative. I wrote it off one line that really had nothing to do with it. I tried making it different from the others things I've written. I also tried to make it simple so everyone could understand it. Could you critique it and help me improve it?
In the moments time left behind
Aloft in thought in the crevices of my mind
Peering through window panes of my imagination
Watching as the seasons of my life pass by...
Winter-
Chilled to the bone, quivering in afterthought
Pondering the what ifs and the could-have-beens
As I walk barefoot in the cold, striving to impress
The insecurities of my mind are clearly defined
Spring-
These are the times when cast from my mind
Are the icicles that hinder and bind
Alive are these times when happiness within
Breathes life evermore into my fragile being
Summer-
The courageous, awe-inspiring fire inside
Limited only by the trickle of my insecurity
Whose tender care gives rise to my humility
The single most impressive facet to behold
Fall-
As life's beauties unfold before my eyes
Drifting by in a collage of colors
Landing delicately beside the path I walk
I'm reminded once more of the reason why...
Why I love every moment...
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